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- I had an unforgettable time to read my favorite book, Twilight, last summer vacation. I have never been obsessed with a book like this, although I have already watched film of it. The fact was that I still enjoyed every minute of it. This was an exquisite fantasy written by Stephanie Meyer, which brought me into a mysterious and exciting world. I could not put it down until I reached the end of this book. I got great joys in reading Twilight. For another thing, I got some new friends last summer holiday, who were also interested in Twilight as I did. Mimicking some classical plots of this book, we made a short video and uploaded to the social website. That’s how I had great fun last summer holiday.
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- I had a happy summer holiday last year because I spent about one week travelling to Hong Kong with my mother.In Hong Kong,I was shocked by the beautiful harbor city,breathtaking beaches and welcoming ...
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