Alone in the Dark

It is midnight， time for people to go to bed. But for some of the city inhabitants， it is just the beginning of a new day.

　　I am walking slowly along one of the busiest streets of the urban area. Everything seems quite different from it was during the day time. The buildings， the statues， the river， the trees，the street lights， the rusty pipes， the empty bottles， all seem to be refilled with energy. A gust of wind passes by， leaving a line of pine trees whispering to each other， "Our time is short！""I'm awake， I'm awake……"Just like what always happens in a fairy tale.

　　"Nature is restless." I walk alone， but never feel lonely， for there are always buildings， street lights accompanying me. Quiet and polite， they are like some well trained servants. Being the only human being in this elf world， I suddenly have the feeling in my heart that the whole city belongs temporarily to met which really gave me a lot of excitement.

　　"The music stops as if to answer an empty knock at the door …… "This beautiful scene reminds me of the poem written on the wall of the Blue Casket. This night， dark， cold but restless， is just like the heart of a human being.

　　簡 評

　　閲讀本文很容易讓人聯想到硃自清先生的"荷塘月色".夜深人靜，忙碌了一天的人們都上牀睡覺了，甚至連動物們都終止了一天的活動。然而，"我"眼中的城市才剛剛囌醒，眼前的一切跟白天相比大相逕庭，到処充滿生機，一片訢訢曏榮的景象。這城市現在衹屬於我一個人，我高興，我快樂，我心滿意足。但接下來呢？讓人意猶未盡。後麪與其說畱下的是懸唸、是聯想，不如說是缺憾，因爲好像寫出的太少太少，未寫的太多太多。所以這篇文章讓人感覺不甚完整。

　　（點評教師：陳碩）