A Typical Day in My Life

「要求」

　　請寫一篇短文，描述你一天的生活，題目自擬，不少於100字。

　　「範文」

　　ass="superseo">ATypical Day in My Life

　　My alarm clock rings at 6 o'clock every morning and I usually get up at once. Exercising for about ten minutes， I comb my hair， wash my face， eat my breakfast， and leave for school.

　　Generally， I go to school by bus. The bus is always crowded. In the bus， I look at the signs through the windows， watch the passengers， and even read the newspaper head lines over someone's shoulder. It takes me about half an hour to get to school.

　　My first class begins at eight o'clock and my last class ends at five. After school hours， I sometimes go to the Students Center or to the library for an hour or so. Afterwards， I go home.

　　As soon as I get home， I sit down， do my homework and study my lessons for the next day. At 7 o'clock， we eat dinner. Then I relax， watch TV， take a walk， or visit a friend.

　　At about 10 o'clock I get into bed and fall asleep immediately. I sleep until the alarm clock goes off again the next morning.

　　If you need anything， don't hesitate to ask.

　　「評語」

　　本文完全按照時間的順序，描寫一天的生活。線索清晰，結搆也很分明，讀後使人一目了然。不足之処是句式比較單一，缺少變化。