範文:Choosing an Appropriate University and a Major

「要求」

　　填報志願對於每個高三畢業生而言都是一件大事。學生家長們對此自然也是關注倍至。在這個過程中，家長和孩子難免會有意見不一致的時候，那麽這時應該聽從誰的意願呢？請你根據以下的提綱寫一篇文章。

　　對於學生及父母來說，這是一個非常重要的問題。

　　誰是主宰者，父母還是學生。

　　你的評論。

　　「範文」

　　Choosingan Appropriate University and a Major

　　Choosing an appropriate university and a major is a common concern that worries both students and their parents. By tradition， a famous university or an excellent major means a successful career in the future.

　　Who should be seriously involved in this problem， students or their parents？ Usually many parents impose their decisions on their children. They think that they know more than their young and they have more experience. However， they should leave enough room for the students to do whatever they want to. If the students choose a major which they are interested in， they will exert their effort to work and study future and they want their dreams to come true. They would like to choose their own majors.

　　This problem is worthy of our attention. Parents should respect their children's decisions and at the same time students should also take their parent's advice into consideration.

　　「評語」

　　該文圍繞題目展開論述，內容充實，層次清楚。行文流暢，詞語搭配得儅，表達清楚。