範文:Examinations

「要求」

　　每個學生在其學習生涯中都會經歷大大小小無數次的考試。每個人對考試的看法都不相同，有人認爲考試是促進學習的手段，而有人則認爲考試是一種出題人的主觀評價，耗費學生的精力，阻礙他們學習更多的新知識。那麽考試到底有什麽作用呢？請你從下麪三個方麪入手以考試爲題寫一篇文章。

　　考試通常被認爲是促進學生學習的手段。

　　但不同的人對考試看法不同。

　　如何利用考試這一手段更好地促進學習。

　　「範文」

　　Examinations

　　Examinations have generally been regarded as a means to stimulate students to make greater efforts to study. However， different people have different ideas about examinations.

　　Some people believe that examinations can help students go over what they have learnt and find out their weak points in studying. They are almost sure that if examinations were cancelled， most students would not study hard. But others think that examinations are a form of subjective assessment and cannot reflect a student's ability and talent. Usually students spend so many hours preparing for examinations that they have no time lift to learn new knowledge.

　　Now the most important thing is to reform examinations. The purpose of examinations should be not only to help students review and assess what they have already learnt but also to encourage them to study hard and raise their abilities to analyze and solve problems.

　　「評語」

　　本文按照題目所給的三個方麪分爲三段。首段用一句話簡要概括了普遍的觀點，而後用“However”一詞引出不同的人有不同的看法，爲第二段做好了鋪墊。第二段敘述了兩種具有代表性的看法，條理清晰，邏輯嚴密。末段談到了要通過改革使考試能夠更有傚地達到促進學習的目的。全文三段之間連接自然順暢，內容切題，行文簡潔，表達準確。