範文:The Automobile

「要求」

　　汽車自發明以來，已成爲人們生活中不可缺少的一部分。請你以下麪三句話分別作爲三段段首的主題句，寫一篇關於汽車的文章。

　　The automobile is constantly improved.

　　The speed of the automobile can be of great advantage in time of emergency.

　　On the other hand， the automobile can cause damage because of the violation of driving regulations.

　　「範文」

　　TheAutomobile

　　The automobile is constantly improved. Man has given his talents to full play in designing and perfecting all kinds of automobiles. Old-fashioned types are replaced by new ones， which are faster， more energy-saving. more enduring and more comfortable. The engine， the wheels， the body， the tires and the inner furnishing have all undergone much improvement.

　　The speed of the automobile can be of great advantage in time of emergency. When a hospital receives an urgent call， its ambulance dashes to the sick or the wounded person. It carries him to the hospital before it is too late to save his life. Being informed of a crime， the police drive to the spot to subdue the criminal. When a building is on fire， the fire engine runs at a high speed to put out the fire.

　　Life doesn't give itself to one who tires to keep all its advantage at once.

　　On the other hand， the automobile can cause damage because of the violation of traffic regulations . It is not a rare happening that two cars collide on the motor way and the drivers get killed. It is often reported that a truck overrides a child or throws down a bicyclist. The most dreadful is the accident that a bus falls down a steep hill with all passengers falling victims to the tragedy.

　　「評語」

　　本文根據所給的主題句展開段落。第一段寫汽車在許多方麪都得到了改進。第二段擧例陳述了汽車在緊急時刻的作用。第三段擧例說明了由於違章駕駛汽車所造成的危害。全篇文理通順，論據充足，語言明白易懂。