範文:Bicycles

「要求」

　　自行車在中國恐怕是人們日常生活中最常用的交通工具之一。請你根據下麪的提綱以“Bicycles”爲題寫一篇短文。

　　中國“自行車王國”之稱。

　　自行車是一種必不可少的交通工具。

　　自行車給城市帶來的問題。

　　「範文」

　　Bicycles

　　Bicycles have become part of our lives. In our country almost everybody has at least one bicycle. That's why we are called “the Kingdom of Bicycles”。

　　It is necessary for us to own a bicycle. We go to school and go to work by bicycle. Wherever we go ， the most common means of transportation is the bicycle. Furthermore， riding bicycles is good to our health. When riding a bicycle， we need to coordinate the movement of our arms， legs as well as our mind just like doing exercises. Even though we have higher living standards and more cars ， we still regard bicycles as our life necessity. We can't imagine what our life would be without bicycles.

　　However， bicycles also bring problems to our life. Some people don't abide by regulations when riding bicycles and some don't take others' safety into consideration while riding too fast. During rush hours， thousands of bicycles appear on the narrow streets. Traffic jam caused by bicycles is nothing new. Therefore， we have a long way to go to solve the problem.

　　「評語」

　　該文內容切題，結搆清楚。用詞準確，句子與句子之間啣接恰儅，富有邏輯性。