範文:Why a Sense of Humor is Important 1

「要求」

　　幽默感是上天賜給人類的禮物，是快樂生活中所必不可少的要素。請你以下麪的提綱寫一篇短文，談談爲什麽幽默感非常重要。

　　幽默感是上天賜給人類的禮物，是公認的最有價值的性格特征之一。

　　幽默可以促進我們的身心健康。

　　幽默有助於我們與他人和諧相処。

　　綜上所述，…

　　「範文」

　　Whyass="superseo">a Sense of Humor is Important

　　A sense of humor， God's greatest gift to mankind， is universally considered the most valuable personality asset. It is born within every person's heart， but has to be cultivated. A person without humor is just like a spring without flowers and a dish without seasoning. In a sense， your personality lies in your sense of humor.

　　Humor can enhance physical as well as mental well being. It helps us bear our burdens， lessen our tension， overcome our frustration， relax our body muscles， and dissolve countless trifles and irritations. With the cracking of a joke， all our worries， sadness and tiredness disperse like mist and smoke， and we are full of vigor once again.

　　Humor helps us live in harmony with others. It is unavoidable to have misunderstanding and tension with others during work or study. But humor can ，as a“pacifier”， inject a light note into the touchy situation to ease these problems quicker than angry words or quarrels. With it you can always keep on good terms with others.

　　In short， a sense of humor is really one of the keys to happiness. It gives zest to life to make it worth living.

　　「評語」

　　該文語言生動流暢，用詞準確。尤其是詞語的搭配比較講究，值得大家學習。文章內容切題，層次清楚，句與句之間的連接富有邏輯性。