範文:Good Manners

「要求」

　　文明禮貌（GoodManners）請以下麪三句話分別作爲三段段首的主題句，寫一篇以文明禮貌爲題的文章。

　　People all over the world set great regard on good manners.

　　There are good manners in which we behave in public places.

　　If everyone has developed good manners…

　　「範文」

　　Good Manners

　　People all over the world set great regard on good manners. To a certain degree， good manners indicate a person's good education and breeding. In schools， it is part of students' moral trailing to develop good manners. A person with good manners always wins praise. On the contrary， people will frown on him if he behaves roughly and impolitely.

　　There are good manners in which we behave in public places. It is a good manner to offer help to the young， the old and the handicapped when they are in need of it. So is it to behave politely and keep away from foul language. Besides， we should guard against such minor offenses as making a loud noise， casting peels and shells， smoking and spitting.

　　If everyone has developed good manners， people will from a more harmonious relationship. If everyone behaves considerately towards others and follows the social ethics， people will live in a better world. With the general mood of society improved， there will be a progress of civilization.

　　「評語」

　　本文按照題目所給的綱要從三方麪論述了文明禮貌的重要性。意思明晰，文理通順。“frown on”，“keep away from”，“guard against”，“minor offenses”等小詞用得準確自然，很好地傳達了作者的意思。