範文:Man s Strong Will

「要求」

　　堅強的意志（Man'<strong class="superseo">s Strong Will）

　　請以下麪三句分別作爲三段段首的主題句，寫一篇以堅強的意志爲題的文章。

　　Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality.

　　There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will.

　　It is not easy to cultivate a strong will.

　　「範文」

　　Man's Strong Will

　　Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality. It is neither genius nor extraordinary ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome whatever hardship that befalls. It is strong will that enables us to endure the trying situation and to attain our goals. Strong will gives us light when we are in the dark， and encouragement when we are frustrated. With this meritorious quality， no enemy can overwhelm us， and no obstacles can stand in our way. As the saying goes， where there is a will， there is a way.

　　All pain helps to make us rise， how-ever much we may hate it at the time.

　　There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will. During the Long March， the Red Army soldiers met with the greatest hardship men have ever experienced. They had nothing to eat but grass roots and barks of trees. It was their strong will that made them defeat the hardship. Helen Keller， a strong willed American blind woman， mastered the English language and became a well-known educator. Such instances abound， and suffice it just to enumerate the two.

　　Develop a high tolerance for ambiguity——you'll be more satisfied.

　　It is not easy to cultivate a strong will. First of all， we must set up a firm faith in our cause， namely， the cause of communism， and be ready to devote our lives to it. Secondly， we must learn from strong-willed persons， especially， from revolutionary martyrs who fought for communism to the last drop of blood. Finally， we should boldly go through trials and hardships to train our will so as to get rid of the weak points of our moral character.

　　「評語」

　　本文爲議論文。首段的"neither…nor…""It is strong will that…"，和"no enemy…no obstacles…"的運用，加強了文章的語氣，突出了堅強意志的重要價值。段末的格言起到了畫龍點睛的作用。第二段用了紅軍二萬五千裡長征和海倫·凱勒這兩個例子，有力地証明了堅強的意志能使人獲得成功這一主題。末段談如何培養堅強的意志，層次清晰，觀點正確，具有說服力。