範文:Is Failure a Bad Thing 1

「要求」

　　每個人的生活中都有過失敗的經歷，失敗對於我們來說，到底意味著什麽？請你按如下提綱寫一篇文章，談談你對失敗的理解。

　　失敗是生活中的常事。

　　人們對失敗的態度各不相同。

　　就我而言，我認爲失敗…

　　「範文」

　　IsFailure a Bad Thing

　　Failure is quite a common thing in our life. As long as we do things we will surely encounter difficulties. Of course we should try our best to get over them， but in many cases， it is not so easy， or even impossible. Then how should we face failure？

　　Different people take different attitudes towards failure. When faced with failure， some people become frustrated and lose their selfconfidence. They refuse to make any further efforts. These people will probably never amount to anything in life. Some people just don't fear failure. They firmly believe that failure is the mother of success. As a result， not only can failure stop them， but they draw useful lessons from it and try even harder. Such people are sure to succeed someday.

　　As for me， I don't think failure is a bad thing. Failure can never discourage me but only enrich my experience and steel my will. With this positive attitude in mind， I will try hard in anything I'm determined to accomplish and attain success in the end.

　　「評語」

　　本文按題目所給綱要分爲三段。首段簡要地論述了失敗是每個人都會遇到的，末句用了一句設問，起到了承上啓下的作用。第二段談到了人們對失敗的兩種典型態度，先寫錯誤觀點進行鋪墊，而後再寫正確觀點。這種安排自然突出了作者所贊同的態度，同時爲引出第三段做好的了準備。末段作者則闡明了自己的觀點。全文層次清楚，段落間啣接緊密而自然，主題突出，語言流暢，用詞準確。