範文:Happiness

「要求」

　　人人都渴望幸福，但對幸福的理解卻不盡相同：有人追逐金錢，有人看重名譽，有人渴望友情，有人眡愛情爲人生的崇高追求。你呢？寫下你對幸福的看法。

　　字數：100左右。

　　「範文」

　　Happiness

　　Happiness means different things to different people. For example some people believe that if they have a lot of money or many material things， they will be happy. They believe that if they are wealthy， they will be able to do everything they want， and so they will be happy. On the other hand， some people believe that money is not the only source of happiness. These people value their intelligence， or their health， or their religion； these things make them happy， For me， happiness is closely tied to my family. I am happy if my father and my mother live in harmony. When all the members of my family share the good time and the bad， I am happy. Although the definition of happiness depends on the individual， my “wealth” of happiness is my family.

　　Remember this， —— that very little is needed to make a happy life.

　　「評語」

　　作者首先列出不同人對幸福的不同理解，然後引出作者本人對幸福的觀點—“closely tied to my family”尤其“I'm happy if my father and mother live in harmony”讀來令人感動。全篇行文流暢，結搆嚴謹，首尾呼應。