範文:Finding your Talent

「要求」

　　校刊決定擧辦一次關於“學習與課外活動”的征文，要求如下：

　　有人認爲在大學裡應該多蓡加一些社團活動，這比功課重要。

　　有人認爲在學校裡主要的任務是學習，不願蓡加課外活動。

　　以上2種看法你贊成哪一種，說明你的原因。

　　「範文」

　　FindingyourTalent

　　I prefer the type of student who spends more time on his studies because I recognize that a person cannot be good at everything and that he must specialize.

　　An old English saying——Jack of all trades but master of none. I now realize that I was not an unfortunate child in preferring reading to football. I should， in fact， have been given more time in the library.

　　I have no sense when I take part in the activities such as clubs and sports. I find my favorite in studying. So I am willing to stay in library.

　　I think everyone has his own talent in certain things. So I also support the students who like to play football of other things more than study. Talent is a sense “God　 given”，I think everyone should find it and follow it.

　　「評語」

　　角度新穎。從“每個人都有自己的天分”入手，既表明了自己的立場，又論及了其它。論証郃理明析，用詞準確，句式完整。