範文:Haste Makes Waste

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　　Haste Makes Waste

　　There is an old saying，“Haste makes waste.”It was the experience of our forefathers， but it is correct in many cases even today.

　　Usually， if you act quickly， you can reach your goals sooner. But this isn't always the case. If you emphasize only speed and ignore the quality of your work， you will have the opposite result. The hastier you are， the slower you achieve completeness and success. In short， haste makes waste.

　　Assume that you are preparing for your final examination. There are a lot of exercises to do and many rotes to remember. The fact that you don't have enough time makes you very worried. So you read and write continuously， without rest， without sleep， without relaxation. The result is that your brain is less and less efficient and your work is slower and slower. The situation goes from bad to worse. All your efforts lead to nothing.

　　On the contrary， if you prepare with a deliberate plan and carry out the plan step by step. Your work will be effective.

　　Whatever you do， please remember the saying——“Haste makes waste”。If you understand and apply it in your study or work， you'll certainly benefit a lot from it.

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