範文:My Teacher

「要求」

　　根據下麪的提示寫作。你的英語老師張小姐是你所遇到的的一位老師。她盡職盡責，在學習上嚴格要求你們，耐心輔導你們的功課；課下是你們的朋友，和你們一起玩，開玩笑。縂之，張老師是你的一位良師益友，你爲有這樣一位老師而感到幸運。

　　「範文」

　　MyTeacher

　　My English teacher， Miss Zhang， is the best teacher I have ever had. She not only teaches us very well， but also treats us as if we were her younger brothers and sisters.

　　She is strict with us in our studies. And with her help， we have made great progress in English. She is patient in her teaching. She is never tired of helping us with our work. Sometimes， she visits us at home to see how we do our homework. And she never scolds us. She only reminds us to be careful and try to correct the mistakes if we make them.

　　Miss Zhang is also our close friend. After class she often plays and jokes with us.

　　I feel lucky to have such an excellent teacher and I love her very much.

　　「評語」

　　文章充滿了對一位優秀老師的敬愛之情，結搆嚴謹，用詞精儅，感激之情溢於言表，值得品味。