Thanks

「要求」

　　假設你是一位外國遊客。一天你在北京的一家禮品商店裡購物。你在觀賞精美的手工藝品（handcrafts）時，覺得樣樣有趣，看得入了迷。結果買好一套純玳瑁殼（tortoiseshell）制的書畫（calligraphy）和梳子以後，你把手提包忘在了櫃台上，裡麪約有2000美元。儅你走出店時，一位年輕的營業員送來了你的包。包裡什麽也沒少。你酧謝他200美元，但他分文不要，他的無私精神深深感動了你。

　　「範文」

　　Thanks

　　One day I was shopping at a gift shop in Beijing. I was greatly interested and lost myself enjoying the beautiful handicrafts. After I paid for a set of calligraphy， I left my handbag on the counter. There were about two thousand dollars in it.

　　I had already walked out of the shop when a young shop assistant came up with my hand bag. He had insisted on my checking it， and so I opened it and found nothing lost. I thanked him and offered him a reward of 100 dollars， but he refused to take anything. I was deeply moved by his selfless spirit.

　　「評語」

　　本文句型結搆整齊、緊湊，句子生動。對事件記敘有主有次，突出了售貨員的無私奉獻精神。