Quick! What shall I do ?

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「要求」

  如果你走進洗澡間,發現水龍頭沒關,洗澡間已漫水成災。這時,你該怎麽辦?請以“Quick!What shall I do?”爲題,用第一人稱寫一篇文章,描述“災情”,竝說明你“救災”的過程。“救災”過程如下。

  擰上水龍頭。

  用水桶舀水。

  用拖把擦乾。

  收拾完畢,引出教訓。100字左右。

  「範文」

  Quick! What shall I do ?

  I get to the bathroom. It is flooding. Someone has forgotten to turn off the tap. The wash basin is full of water and the water is soon covering the floor and running into the next room. What shall I do? I rush to the floor and turn off the tap as quickly as possible. Then I use a pail to carry the water. One pail after another I pour the water into the bath-tub until no water can be held by the pail. Then I use the mop to dry up the floor.

  After an hour's hard work the bathroom is OK again. I think everyone should remember to turn off the tap next time.

  「評語」

  文章寫得生動活潑,富有生活情趣。沒有用太難的詞滙,卻顯得敘事清晰流暢,風格明快自然,表現出較好的語言功底和文字表達能力。由於題中的內容比較簡略,需要個人適度發揮,因此“One pail after another……”這樣的句子就顯得很可貴。全篇文章結搆完整、有條理;句式富於變化,充分表達了題目的要求。

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