幫助大娘找兒子

「內容提示」

　　根據下列內容，寫一篇關於你如何幫助一位大娘找到她的兒子的文章。

　　放學廻家的路上，你看見一位老大娘背著一個沉甸甸的袋子站在路旁，樣子十分焦急。你走上前去問她是怎麽廻事。原來大娘剛從鄕下來，進城看望她在鋼鉄廠工作的兒子。由於初次進城，不知道去鋼鉄廠的路。於是你就幫她背著袋子，帶老大娘去找她的兒子。你們費了很大功夫才找到她兒子的住処，老大娘和兒子十分感激。你廻家很晚，又累又餓，但你很高興，因爲你爲別人做了件好事。

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　　Helping an Old Woman in Finding Her son

　　高原

　　One day on my way home from school， I saw an old woman standing by the roadside①， with a heavy bag on her back. She seemed very worried. I went up to ask her what the matter was. The granny② told me that she had just come from the countryside to see her son， who worked in the steel works. As she had never been here before， she did not know the way to the factory. So I took her there. There was really a lot of difficulty in finding her son's place. The granny and her son were very thankful to me.

　　I got home very late， tired and hungry， but I felt happy， for I had done a good deed for the people.

　　「詞語解釋」

　　①roadside ['r udsaid] n.路邊

　　②granny ['gr$ni] n.[口]老婆婆；老嬭嬭

　　「寫法指要」

　　本文是一篇寫事的記敘文。寫記敘文首先要交待清楚時間（when）、地點（where）、人物（who）、事件（what）、原因（why）和如何（how）六要素。這裡的時間是“放學後”，地點是“路邊”，人物是“我，老大娘和她兒子”，事件是“幫助找人”，原因是“老大娘不認識路”，最重要的是寫好“如何（how）”，即事情發展的經過。寫好事件經過的方法是按時間順序安排好行爲情節（action），即我們通常所說的“層次”。本文可分爲4個行爲情節：路遇大娘，上前問訊，領其找子，娘倆致謝。最後，作者用一句話表達自己的思想感情，作爲結尾。