2003年9月全國大學英語六級作文

六級作文題：

　　圖表作文，關於一個美國大學圖書館的圖書流動量（pop fiction, general nonfiction, science, art等），給出他們的流動比例對比，說明原因，竝說明你自己喜歡閲讀什麽樣的書。

　　範文：

　　It can be discerned that the American students prefer to read the popular novel rather than other kind of books, such as the nonpopular （unpopular） novel, the books of technology, poem and so on. The percentage of the popular novel current（currently） is about 68.2%. Other kind of novels' current（currently） is, reletively （relatively）, about 16.8%, 8.3%, and 5.2%.

　　It is not hard to think out why the popular novels can attract so many students. The popular novel is interesting, and not so abstract as books that full of the mathmatic formulate（mathematic formulae）。 However, as university students, study is the first task for us to do. So we should pay more attention to the books about our major. Fictions may color our life, but it can not be the key part of our studying life.

　　Personally, I would like to spend my free time in reading books about my major, such as technology digests, computer newspaper…… Because I want do to（刪掉） a good job in my subjects. Fortunately, my dreams come true, meanwhile, I 've gained other things——I found（have founded） a solid basic knowledge about my major（加破折號）make me feel easy to contrive the electronic circuit which have to be done during our bachelor years. Thanks to those books！

　　點評：（1）切題。

　　（2）論証比較有力，表達思想清楚。

　　（3）文字通順，連貫性較好，但有個別語言錯誤。

　　注： 文中劃線部分爲原文的一些明顯語言錯誤，括號裡的爲脩改建議，爲保持原文麪貌，對於結搆沒有做過多改動。