A Diary(1)

「要求」

　　放暑假了，天氣炎熱，你和同學們去學校遊泳館遊泳。人很多，人們以各種不同的泳姿遊著。你一開始不會跳水。但在同學的指導下，你終於學會了。廻家以後，你就今天遊泳的事寫了篇日記。

　　「範文」

　　ass="superseo">ADiary

　　July 20th， Sunday Sunny

　　It was a hot Sunday afternoon. I want to swim in the school swimming natarorium with several of my classmates. When we arrived， many people were already there. They swam in various styles.

　　Quickly changing into my swimming suit in the changing room， I jumped into the pool.

　　One of my classmates told me how to dive and showed me. I put my arms over my head and dived. I did beautifully at last.

　　An hour passed before I knew it. I got out of the pool and fell a little tired but very happy.

　　「評語」

　　這是一篇日記躰的記敘文，記敘了一次遊泳。作者先概括寫了遊泳池的情況，然後寫自己學跳水的經過。文章內容不多，但有些詞語如“in company with”，“changing room”等要學會運用。