寫作訓練範文講評：周末

「要求」
　　周末兩天的休息對於平時忙於工作學習的人們來說是非常寶貴的。請你根據下列提綱寫一篇短文。

　　周末對於人們來說意味著什麽。

　　每個人都有自己度周末的方式。

　　我是怎樣度周末的。

　　「範文」

　　Weekends

　　Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest. For example， people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.

　　Everyone spends weekends in his own way. Within two days， some people can relax themselves by listening to music， reading novels， or watching films. Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball， wimming or dancing. Different people have different relaxations.

　　I often spend weekends with my family or my friends. Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends. Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge. I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision. An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends. Weekends are always enjoyable for me.

　　「評語」

　　全文思路清晰，論述充分，語言流暢易懂。用詞講究，注意了詞語搭配，沒有重複、堆砌之感。