Just for Some Stamps,第1張

Just for Some Stamps,第2張

「要求」

  你有過等待的經歷嗎?如果雖然等了很久,最後還是沒等到,那又會怎麽樣呢?寫下你的感覺吧。不少於100字。

  「範文」

  Justfor Some Stamps

  I don't know how it is that whenever I go to a post office, I always find people have some long and complicated business to go. Only coming in to buy some stamps, I am obliged to wait patiently while some annoying people take ten minutes to complete a form that even a child can fill out in one minute. People in other queues move quickly forward to take their turn and are served by cheerful smiling clerks. Sometimes feeling that I cannot endure waiting in my motionless queue any longer, I decide to join another one. It may be longer, but at least it is moving. This turns out to be the worst thing I could have done.

  Finally my turn comes. The clerk pushes forward a printed sign saying“CLOSED” and without a smile says briefly:“Sorry, going to lunch.”

  I wait and wait, but…

  「評語」

  這是一段精彩的小幅描寫,因爲等待的焦急心理,及至於對別人的不滿而咒罵,都很生動,尤其是殘酷性的結尾更是出人意料。選材必須是自己熟悉的,這一點很重要。

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