My Profession

「要求」

　　每個人都有自己的理想，將來在社會上你想從事什麽職業呢？請以“MyProfession”爲題，談談自己想從事的職業，你選擇這個職業的原因，你將爲實現這個理想做哪些準備。

　　「範文」

　　My Profession

　　If I may choose my own profession， I would like to be a doctor. It is said that doctors make a lot of money， but this is not what I am after.

　　Illness and disease always bring pain and suffering to mankind. Only doctors who are trained to know the causes of different kinds of illness and the best ways to cure them can help prevent them. What's more， a doctor is a useful person and respected by people.

　　I'll work hard to learn as much as possible. In particular， I should do well in physics， chemistry and mathematics. I hope to enter a medical school after I graduate from high school.

　　「評語」

　　文章緊釦題意，開頭說明了他的職業追求，接著敘述了選擇這一職業的原因及自己所作的準備，表達了作者爲人類解除痛苦戰勝疾病的良好願望。語言流暢，內容充實，是一篇優秀的文章。