A Spring Outing

「要求」

　　相信你肯定有過和同學一同春遊的經歷。現在就請你寫一篇短文記述你經歷的一次有趣的春遊。

　　「範文」

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　　Every year， with the coming of spring， the weather will get warmer. And we usually have a spring outing at this time of the year.

　　Because of the warm and pleasant days， many people would like to go for an outing. I still remember one of my spring outings， for it was a very interesting experience. It was a bright and cheerful morning. I made a decision to visit a famous mountain near our campus. I went along with some of my schoolmates. We were singing and laughing all the way. There was a large piece of green grass land at the mountain foot. When we were climbing， we could see many beautiful flowers on the mountainside. The mountain was very high ，but we reached its top at last. There， we visited a temple and had a talk with a monk. He told us something about the history of the temple and we got to know about Sakyamuni， the founder of Buddhism. From the mountain top， we could get a birds'-eye view of our campus. It seemed very small.

　　When it was getting dark we returned. Although we were very tired at night， we were too excited to go to sleep.

　　Comes spring！ Let's have an outing！

　　「評語」

　　在本文中，作者廻憶了與同學們共同經歷的一次愉快的春遊。內容雖然比較簡單，但結搆清晰完整，語言流暢，表達生動，竝沒有給人以寫流水帳之感。