範文:I Am a Dog

I have a tail and four legs. I have sharp teeth and run very fast.

　　I belong to the family of the wolf and the fox. But they remain wild while I have been tamed and trained to do many things， including keeping watch， hunting， shepherding and searching for travelers lost in the snow.

　　I am truthful to men and like to be a friend of men. I can defend my master at the cost of my own life.

　　Of course you can easily guess what I am： I am a dog.

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　　本文充分地寫出了狗的習性、特點。語言樸實、自然，句式豐富多變而又富有感染力，如including 後麪的一長串動名詞組成的排比句爲文章增色不少。結尾的點題也顯得生動有趣。