範文:Equality between Men and Women

「要求」

　　我們應該提倡男女平等嗎？有人認爲不應該提倡，因爲許多男人能做的事女人不能去做。男人比女人做出的貢獻多，所以應該享有更多的權利。你認爲呢？寫一篇80字左右的文章論述你的觀點。

　　「範文」

　　Equalitybetween Men and Women

　　Should men and women be equal？ Many said that men and women should not be equal， because there are many things men can do that could notbe done by women. Therefore men are stronger than women， and the former should have more rights than the latter. In my opinion， men and women should be equal. Nowadays many things could also be done by women. So I think that women should come out of the kitchen.

　　That the woman was made of a rib out of the side of Adam； not out of his feet to be trampled upon by him， but out of his side to be equal with him， under his arm to be protected， and near his heart to be loved.

　　「評語」

　　本文形式活潑，整躰上爲設問形式，各句之間啣接自然，觀點明確，是一篇較爲優秀的應試作文。