範文:The Danger of Fake Commodities

「要求」

　　要求：目前社會上有不少假冒偽劣産品（fake commodities），請用100字左右論述爲什麽會有這種現象，竝擧例說明假冒偽劣商品對消費者個人、社會等的危害。

　　「範文」

　　TheDanger of Fake Commodities

　　Today， fake commodities are quite common. In order to get high profits， some factories and companies produce fake commodities. Another cause of this phenomenon is that laws are not strict enough. Fake Commodities can bring about great loss to both state and private property. A case in point is that if a consumer buys some fake medicine， he will inevitably suffer much pain. The fake medicine may even cost him his life. So every one of us has the duty to fight against fake commodities for our society and for ourselves.

　　「評語」

　　本文短語的使用恰到好処，便文章既不枯燥乏味又無畫蛇添足的累贅感。