Lovely Autumn

「要求」

　　從春夏鞦鼕中任選一個季節，描述其特色。要求抓住特點，描寫述具躰、生動。字數150—200字。

　　「範文」

　　LovelyAutumn

　　Autumn is the season I like best because it is neither too hot nor too cold and because I can go hiking in the countryside.

　　The sound of golden yellow leaves crackling beneath my footsteps make me rejoice.

　　Oh！ How wonderful it is to be with nature again！

　　The few wild flowers still growing in the autumn certainly look lovelier than the summer ones. They are not so colorful， but in my eyes， they are more serene and charming than the rest.

　　Nature is around， and I can feel her smiling sweetly at me. How I wish autumn would never leave me. But this is a wish which will never come true， for seasons never stop changing.

　　The beautiful blue sky with fleecy clouds can be seen through the bare branches of the trees， which seem to grow high enough to meet the heaven.

　　To feel the rain dripping down my face and neck and washing away the signs of summer from nature is splendid. Then， at last as the rain becomes too heavy， I'll go to find shelter in my private corner where I keep my special findings of autumn， to help me remember that autumn is wonderful， beautiful and lovely， and not at all bleak and lonely and bare.

　　「評語」

　　這是一篇描寫鞦天的作文，作者選取樹葉、野花、藍天、白雲，作爲鞦天的代表，於細微処見真情。文章中三次詠歎，更抒發了作者對於鞦天的無比眷唸。