範文:The value of Friends

「要求」

　　請以友誼爲內容寫一篇短文，闡明你對友誼的看法。字數80─100.

　　「範文」

　　Thevalue of Friends

　　When you are lonely， do you　 like to have someone to cheer you up？ When you are in trouble， do you like to have somebody to consult with and to help you out？ When you are interested in something， do you like someone to enjoy it with you？

　　These and many other similar questions may be asked. The answers will always be“yes ”， and the persons desired are friends.

　　Doctors can cure out diseases with medicine， but who can release us from mental suffering if we have no friends？ In most cases， it is a friend who can make you happy. A good friend shares your troubles， and he helps you solve your difficult problems that you may encounter.

　　「評語」

　　文章以三個問句開頭，間接肯定了友誼的作用，接著對友誼進行了進一步闡述。文字流暢，表達貼切，內容切題。

　　Should old acqueitances be forgetten？（舊日朋友豈能相忘。）