範文:The advantages of private tutoring

「要求」

　　高校大學生的勤工儉學來源是家教，很多中小學生都有家教。這是爲什麽呢？這又說明什麽呢？請寫出你的看法。

　　「範文」

　　Theadvantages of private tutoring

　　A recent study shows that about 80% of pupils have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parents， for various reasons， missed the chance to obtain a good education. so when their children have difficulty with their school work， they are helpless.

　　Private tutoring is a good solution. As private tutoring is usually one-on-one， the teacher knows the strengths as well as the weaknesses of the pupil， and teaching is， in most cases， directly to the point. Private tutoring benefits a lot of pupils.

　　「評語」

　　看了事實然後進行分析，試圖從邏輯上推出前因後果，而這些又都需要事實來証明。這個命題是開放性的，大家完全可以各抒已見。本文清晰嚴謹地表達了自己的看法；缺點是衹看到有益的一麪，略顯單薄。

　　When teaching a lesson， the teacher reads his student continuously， and change the subject if he is losing the audience.