範文:Travel

「要求」

　　暑假就要到了，許多同學都會選擇旅遊作爲度假的一種方式。的確，旅遊對一個人的身心健康頗有好処。那麽就請你以下麪三句話分別作爲三段段首的主題句，寫一篇旅遊的文章。

　　Travel is a very good means of broadening a person's perspective.

　　Travel may relieve a person of boredom and gloom.

　　Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages.

　　「範文」

　　Travel

　　Travel is a very good means of broadening a person's perspective. It makes you come into contact with different cultures， meet people of different colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies. Travelling much， you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences， but also be aware of the vastness of nature.

　　Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction. It gives you a pleasant experience， which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories. Later， you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences， thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind.

　　The field's his study， nature was his book.

　　Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive. Buses and trains are less expensive， but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick. Most people can afford traveling by bicycle， which， although slow， can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature.

　　「評語」

　　本文首先陳述了旅遊能夠開濶人們眼界的原因，接著指出爲什麽旅遊能夠消除煩悶、抑鬱的心情，最後說明進行旅遊可採取的不同交通工具的優缺點。本篇各段解釋言簡意明，主題突出。“come into contact with…”，“enrich you knowledge and experiences”，“be aware of the vastness of nature”，“disperse your boredom”，“broaden your mind”等詞語的恰儅搭配，生動而準確地表現出了旅遊的益処。