議論文寫作樣例3

Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with？ Use examples to support your position.

　　試題分析

　　一 條件： 對青年人成長的影響/有人認爲家庭的影響最重要/有人認爲朋友的影響最重要.

　　二 要求： 你同意何種看法？ 擧例說明自己的觀點

　　三 寫作分析： 題目的含義是家庭和朋友對青年人都有影響,分歧在於這兩種影響中哪一種. 純粹爲寫作目的,可任意確定一種觀點,先表示同意,然後找理由爲自己的觀點辯護.也可用分析法,將不同的情況與不同的人分開,說明各自的特征.本題與心理學和社會心理學有關,若能用其說明,傚果更佳.

　　Of the various factors that can have influence on young adults, the family and friends stand out most. But there is disagreement on which of the two is the most important of all factors. My view is that in most cases, it is friends who have the most important influence on young adults.

　　According to social psychologists, when children become young adults, they undergo some psychological changes. When they are young, children love their parents so much that they simply adore them, imitating their speech and behaviour and trying to learn everything from them eagerly. As they become older, however, they begin to see that their parents are not as perect as they thought, though they still consider their parents better than any other adults. But the process of change still goes on. BY the time they are adults themselves, they have changes so much that they take their parents as equal adults belonging to a different and out-of date generation. Consequently, they go out more often and the influence of their parents begin to decrease.

　　With the image of their parents as perfect or imperfect idols gone from their minds. Young adults turn to the outside world. Those whom they are associated with most are those who are of the same generation. These youngsters drink, smoke,chat, and play together, and they share the same or similar views and values. At this stage, they may not be able to find new idols, but they certainly influence each other in many aspects. They may also be influenced by many other factors in the outside world, but, comparatively speaking, the influence on them comes mostly from those around them——young paople who are their friends.

　　Of course, not all children change in this way. Some of them may still stick to their parents, or even their elder sisters and brothers； and some may turn to their teachers. But, generally speaking, at a certain stage, friends are the most important influence on young adults.

　　範文寫法說明

　　文章認爲朋友的影響,但採用了分析的方法,說明了家庭影響有大到小的變化,也對不同的情況作了區分.

　　第一段： 從題目題條件引出自己觀點

　　第二段： 父母的影響由大到小的變化

　　第三段： 後期的影響主要來自朋友

　　第四段： 區分情況,進一步說明.