My Friend 2

「要求」

　　以“MyFriend”爲題，描寫你的一個朋友，要求包括以下內容（100字左右）：

　　Who is your friend？（name， age）。

　　What does he/she look like？（appearance， height， face）？

　　What kind of person is he/she？

　　Does he/she have any hobby or habit？

　　Do you often do things together？

　　「範文」

　　My Friend

　　Tom is my best friend. He is eighteen years old. He is tall， thin and has a funny face. Our teacher always says that he is a naughty boy because he speaks and plays too much in class. But in fact， he is very clever and does his homework very well. He is glad to help others but he is not polite enough. Playing football is the thing he likes to do best， and he is the captain of our class team. We have been good friends ever since we were 5.We do everything together as much as possible. I like Tom very much.

　　All that glitters is not gold， but gold will glitter finally.

　　「評語」

　　本文結搆緊湊，條理分明，很好地把握了題中的要點，人物形象生動鮮明。語句通順但不夠流暢；句式長短交錯而富於變化。