範文:Choosing My Major

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　　「範文」

　　ChoosingMyMajor

　　Born in a small village in Shanxi Province， I had never experienced anything exciting before I turned 17. I had spent 6 years in primary school and another six in middle school， where I ranked among the top students. Life was extremely simple during those twelve years. For diversion， I enjoyed reading novels and watching TV programs and films. In my imagination I traveled to all those places described in the books or shown on the screen. Once I put my imaginary travels on paper and won a prize in a country wide composition contest. So encouraged， I declared my intention of studying journalism at Ren Min University in Beijing. Everybody in my family opposed my decision， saying that I was too young to be on my own. Although I felt a bit intimidated by Ren Min University's reputation， I finally applied for this famous university.

　　「評語」

　　本文的一個突出特點是行文流暢，語言簡易通順，毫無板滯之処。原因、事實等等，都非常清晰，而且句式變化多，詞語運用霛活，表現出作者較好的駕馭語言的能力。