範文:If I Were a College Student
「要求」
以“假如我是個大學生”爲題,寫一篇100字左右的短文。
「範文」
If I Were a College Student
Were I a college student, I would be the happiest person in the world. I might put aside the heavy work load of the senior high school days and pursue my favorite hobby——painting. Since college life is meant to be independent, I might give free scope to my real talent. Furthermore, I might participate in social and national reconstruction projects. I would abide by my principles by reading more and enriching myself so that I might be of greater use to society upon graduation instead of living up to the name of the so-called college student who goofs off all four years at his university.
「評語」
本文是虛擬語氣的作文,全部時態與現在事實相反,故句中的助動詞一定要用過去式。文章文筆流暢,過渡自然。
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