範文:Too good to Be True

「要求」

　　仔細閲讀下麪的對話，然後將其改寫成一篇簡單的記敘文，要有題目。字數：80——100.

　　Too Good to Be True！

　　（Before a shop window） MO= Mother S= Sue A= Assistant MA= Manager

　　MO： How much is that handbag， Sue？ I can't see the price.

　　S： I'm not sure. It may be 50 pence.

　　MO： 50 pence！ It can't be. Surely it isn't.

　　S： Let's go and ask.

　　MO： How much is that handbag.？

　　A： Which one？

　　MO： The one in the window.

　　A： 50 pence！（Holding the bag） It can't be！ It's made of leather， not plastics. This must be a mistake. I'll go and ask the manager…How much is this handbag？

　　MA： It's ＄5 not 50 pence. That's a mistake.

　　A： I'm sorry， madam.

　　M： OI knew it！

　　S： It was too good to be true！

　　「範文」

　　Too good to Be True

　　Mother and Sue looked at a handbag in a shop window， but they weren't sure of the price. So they went into the shop and asked the assistant. The assistant took the handbag out of the shop window and looked at the price. It was 50 pence. But she couldn't believe that it was so cheap for it was a real leather handbag， so she called her manager. Mother and Sue were very sorry to hear that that the price was wrong. The handbag coat ＄5. Sue said at last：“It was too good to be true.”

　　「評語」

　　在將對話改寫成記述文時，不僅要改變文章的躰裁，而且原文中的人稱、時態、僅能用於口語的一些句子結搆以及會話中常用的表達方法作相應的改變。