難以忘懷的經歷,第1張

難以忘懷的經歷,第2張

「內容提示」

  人人都知道,地震是一件驚天動地,令人恐懼的事。假如你經歷過一場地震而又獲救、幸免於難,你會有一種什麽感覺呢?你肯定會有很多話要傾訴,你肯定一生也不會忘記這樣的經歷。如果你經歷過這樣的事儅然有東西可寫,即使你沒有經歷過也可以設想這樣的情景來寫一篇短文。

  「作文示範」

  An Unforgettable Experience

  吳翠萍

  When I was a little girl, in the summer vacation in 1976, I went to my mother's hometown , Tangshan.

  After I got there, at first I stayed at my uncle's home . I was very happy in my uncle's home because my uncle had a daughter who is older than I. She often took me to visit some places. We spent ten days happily. I remember just on the tenth day there was a big earthquake. It happened about three o'clock in the morning when I was dreaming. I woke up to find myself under a heap of rocks . I couldn't move. I didn't, in fact , know anything about what was happening until my uncle saved me from the rubble①。

  During the earthquake most of the houses fell down. We set up many tents to live in and received a lot of food from every city in our country. They helped us to tide over② those hard days. I think if we hadn't lived in New China we couldn't have survived the big earthquake. I am very lucky and so are my uncle's family.

  (選自1987年4月21日《上海學生英文報》)

  「詞語解釋」

  ①rubble['r)bl] n.碎石;碎甎,破瓦

  ②tide[taid] over 尅服;渡過

  「寫法指要」

  能夠在唐山那樣的大地震中幸存下來,確實是一件幸運的事,令人終生難忘。作者分三個層次寫作此文:1)作者去唐山舅父家度暑假,前十天非常高興;2)第十天晚地震,舅父從瓦礫中把作者救出;3)舅父一家和作者都幸免於難,祖國各地救援;表達對祖國的熱愛。

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