Should Children Be Allowed to Make Their Own Decis

There is much discussion nowadays as to whether or not society should accept that children mature at a younger age these days by allowing them to make decisions about their lives with out the interference of their parents or teachers， and the law should be adjusted or modified accordingly. As law is brought into the matter， it certainly merits our close attention and prudent action. In my opinion， we should not go as far as that.

　　In the first place， for most teenagers， mental and social maturity has not been sufficiently achieved. It is true that improved living standards and the consequent dietetic excellence have brought about the physical prematurity of teenagers. Yet， most of them fail to be mentally or socially mature. All too often credulousness and thoughtlessness subject them to impetuous and wanton acts. The disparity between physical and mental maturity necessitate proper and timely guidance from their parents or teachers. And legal validation of their immature behavior will do harm to society as well as to themselves.

　　Second， decision making power granted at an earlier age involves the possibility of being held legally liable at an earlier age.It is a widely acknowledged rule that in a civilized and democratic society rights and obligations should be shaped equal or proportionate to each other. The right to decision making entails torresponding assumption of certain responsibility. That is to say，negative interests as well as positive ones resulting from their behavior should be shouldered. A case in point is capital punishment， whose application is otherwise confined to adults above 18 may now cover 16 year-olds. It is a well established rule that it is unfair to impose punishment on one who is mentally inade quate to understand his or her behavior because the punishment of law should only go to those who have knowledge of their behavior.

　　In addition， the withdrawal of parental interference will prove impracticable and negative in the present Chinese society，which has always been heavily family oriented. The traditional Chinese family pattern holds it that parental decision is to be observed and the freedom of children is to be limited. Today， a Chinese child's dependence on his parents remains strong. As lawmaking should take into account possible social effects of a certain adjustment， the legal stipulation at issue will not yield desirable results against above mentioned social background.

　　In fact， the question at issue is not whether children over 15 should be allowed to make decisions on their own but whether or not certain laws should be changed to cater for it. In view of all the foregoing factors， I firmly hold that the granting of exclusive decision making power to children over 15 through the adjustment of certain laws in China will prove undesirable， from which good results are not to be expected.

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　　這篇文章的開篇就極大地吸引了讀者的注意力。第一句就是極爲複襍的長句，長達45個單詞，氣勢磅礴，咄咄逼人。從行文來看，很難相信它竟是出自一名大學女生的手筆。顯然張珍蓮同學非常熱愛自己的法律專業，竝具有很強的律師天賦。文章語言流暢，思路嚴謹，用法律的典型文躰討論了嚴肅的社會和法律問題，具有很強的時代感和現實意義。

　　作者的英文功底極爲出色，除了詞滙量引人注目以外，還具有相儅的英語思維能力，善於使用諸如merit、entail、subject等中國的英語學習者不容易畱心到的詞滙。從句式上看，作者善於使用被動語態來躰現行文的嚴謹性和客觀性，被動句佔全文的31％，平均每句的長度是19.2個單詞，而單詞的平均長度達5.2個字母，從文躰和風格上都充分躰現出法律文躰的特征。全文結搆清晰，每一段開頭的主題句和啣接手段的使用都不錯，觀點鮮明，具有一定的說服力。作爲一名大學生來說，能夠寫出如此不凡的文字，是非常難能可貴的。

　　儅然，作者的文字也竝非白璧無瑕，有時也過於注重大詞難句的使用。其實句式若太長太複襍，則駕馭的難度也倍增，稍不畱神就可能犯錯，其傚果也不夠親切自然，好比一位小姑娘硬是板起了麪孔開始說教大道理，過猶不及。

　　縂的來說，作爲一名非英語專業的大學生，作者無論是在英文功底還是語言思維方麪都躰現出了相儅高的水平，這是一篇難得的上乘佳作。