強壯、聰明和仁慈,第1張

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 「內容提示」

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  To Be Strong, Wise and Good

  Once upon a time, there were three brothers living in a faraway (遙遠的) land. Each had his own strong point. Their names were Strong-Arm, Wise-Head and Good-Heart. One day they worked together in saving a girl's life. Since then they knew that it was important to work as one.

  「作文示範」

  To Be Strong, Wise and Good

  任榮珍

  Once upon a time, there lived three brothers in a faraway land. Their names were Strong-Arm, Wise-Head and Good-Heart.

  Strong-Arm spent all his time very happily running, jumping, throwing spears and swimming.

  Wise-Head, too, was very happy. He spent all his time reading, writing, learning and making things with his hands.

  Good-Heart was the happiest of all. He spent all his time helping his brothers and cooking their food.

  One day they saw a girl on the top branch of a great tree, which no one could ever climb, calling “Help! Help!”

  Good-Heart was always ready to help anyone in trouble. So he asked his two brothers for help.

  Wise-head thought about the problem. He worked out the height of the tree, made a piece of long string, and tied a stone to one end of it. Then he told Strong-Arm to throw the stone over the highest branch.

  Then Wise-Head tied a long thick rope to the string, and pulled the other end of the string until the rope, too, went right over the branch and down again.

  So Strong-Arm climbed up the rope, and brought the little girl safely to the ground.

  The three brothers all felt wonderfully happy because they had saved the girl.

  The girl was actually a fairy. She changed herself into the Queen of the Good Spirits. She had come to teach the brothers a lesson in cooperation.

  “Look,”the Queen of the Good Spirits said,“Being only strong or only wise or only good is not enough. The best thing is to be strong and wise and good.”

  So the three brothers lived happily all their life, doing things together.

  (選自任榮珍 The Coconut Tree《椰子樹》)

  「寫法指要」

  這是一篇民間故事,屬記敘文。擴寫記敘文時要根據提示中所給人物特征和故事梗概設計數個行爲情節,然後添加細節,再加上想像力使其搆成一個完整、連貫、吸引人的故事。

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