範文:Conserving Water Resource

「要求」

　　題目：“世界環保日”即將到來，你將爲校廣播站寫一篇宣傳保護水資源的稿件，包含如下要點：

　　水是必不可少的。

　　人類麪臨嚴重缺水問題。

　　我們應該怎麽做。

　　「範文」

　　ConservingWaterResource

　　Water is indispensable to our life and the development of national economy. It is often described as the source of all living things and the lifeblood of agriculture and industry. Without it， nothing could grow and out world would become a terrible desert.

　　The world we live in is now faced with a severe shortage of fresh water. According to some official figures， more than 1，700 million people in the world don't have enough clear water to drink and over 25 thousand people die of water related diseases daily.

　　So， all of us should actively b save water. It's our obligation for the benefit of the future generations.

　　每篇文章都會有自己的特色，要盡力突出自己的閃光點。

　　「評語」

　　文章條理清晰，層次分明，語言流暢，用詞霛活不落俗套。運用了一個比喻，使文章增色不少。