June 3rd, Sunday Sunny

「要求」

　　你今天（6月3日，星期天，晴）下午在去看電影的路上，碰到了一位素不相識的老太太。她看上去很焦急。你上前一打聽，原來她的丈夫正住院，她特地從鄕下進城來看丈夫，但她不知道去毉院的路。你看了信上的地址，也不認識路，就去問警察。在警察的指點下，乘3路公共汽車終於找到了那家毉院。她堅持要把一些雞蛋送給你，你說什麽也不收。告別了這位老太太，你就離開毉院去看電影了。

　　請根據以上情景寫一篇日記。

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　　「範文」

　　June3rd， Sunday Sunny

　　On my way to the cinema， I met an old lady who looked worried. When I asked her why， she answered she had come from the countryside to see her husband in the hospital. But she didn't know where the hospital was. She showed me the letter from her husband with the hospital's name on it. Unfortunately， I didn't know the way either. I went to a policeman for help .He told me how to get there . We took a NO. 3 bus and at last we found the hospital. he thanked me and offered me some eggs. I refused and said good-bye to her. Then I left the hospital and happily went to see a film.

　　「評語」

　　文章敘述條理清晰，緊釦題意，注意到了細節描寫，語言流暢，值得一讀。