March 12th, Sunday Sunny,第1張

March 12th, Sunday Sunny,第2張

「要求」

  以所給的內容爲主要線索,用自己的語言將其擴寫成一篇日記。

  內容提示:

  1.早上8點半工半,10位英國客人來我校蓡觀。

  2.校門口彩旗高掛,學生手拿鮮花,熱烈歡迎。

  3.操場上擧行歡迎會,8位女生獻花,校長與客人先後講話。

  4.會後客人蓡觀圖書館、實騐室和校辦工廠。

  5.下午5點離校。

  時間:3月12日  星期日  晴天。

  字數:80-120.

  「範文」

  March12th, Sunday Sunny

  This morning ten English guests came to visit our school. They arrived at half past eight. We gave them a warm welcome at the school gate, on the top of which were some flying colored flags. With flowers in their hands, some boys and girls were shouting, “Welcome! Welcome!”

  At nine we held a welcome meeting on the playground. First, eight girls presented the guests with flowers. Then our headmaster spoke at the meeting, extending a warm welcome to the guests. One of the guests spoke at the meeting too. He thanked us for our welcome from the bottom of his heart.

  After the meeting we showed the guests around our school. They visited our library lad and school factory.

  At five in the afternoon, they left our school.

  「評語」

  本文作爲一日記,格式正確。文章寫得順序清楚,內容完整,要點齊全,而且前後連貫,文詞也很生動。

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