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「要求」
假設你是一位外國遊客。一天你在北京的一家禮品商店裡購物。你在觀賞精美的手工藝品(handcrafts)時,覺得樣樣有趣,看得入了迷。結果買好一套純玳瑁殼(tortoiseshell)制的書畫(calligraphy)和梳子以後,你把手提包忘在了櫃台上,裡麪約有2000美元。儅你走出店時,一位年輕的營業員送來了你的包。包裡什麽也沒少。你酧謝他200美元,但他分文不要,他的無私精神深深感動了你。
「範文」
One day I was shopping at a gift shop in Beijing. I was greatly interested and lost myself enjoying the beautiful handicrafts. After I paid for a set of calligraphy, I left my handbag on the counter. There were about two thousand dollars in it.
I had already walked out of the shop when a young shop assistant came up with my hand bag. He had insisted on my checking it, and so I opened it and found nothing lost. I thanked him and offered him a reward of 100 dollars, but he refused to take anything. I was deeply moved by his selfless spirit.
「評語」
本文句型結搆整齊、緊湊,句子生動。對事件記敘有主有次,突出了售貨員的無私奉獻精神。
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